Tuesday, October 19, 2010

"Cafeteria from Different Points of View.”

First-person narrator: I had a long day today and I'm very hungry. There this annoying student who is giving the stern cook a hard time. He keeps saying that he's tired of the same old food over and over again. I keep tapping my spoon and clearing my throat loudly to let him know I'm waiting in line. But finally he moves over, and I'm really relieved. I get my food and sat down I took a bite, but my food was cold.

Third-person limited: There was a playful kid that whenever he had a bad day he would annoy the stern cook and whoever was behind him in line a hard time. One day he got an "F" on his math test, so he was mad and kept giving the stern cook a hard time by asking "Why do you always serve the same food over and over?" He kept going on so the kid behind him in line would get mad. He stopped when the kid behind was getting mad because he was scared.

Third-person omniscient: Ounce upon a time there was playful kid that liked to annoy people whenever he had a bad day. It was lunch time, and that kid felt like annoying the stern cook by asking, "Why do you make the same food over and over again?" The cook was annoyed and responded, "I cook whatever is on the schedule, sorry." There was a another student that got done with football practice and was very hungry. He didn't want to be rude and tell him to stop complaining, but gave signs that he was waiting by tapping his spoon and clearing his throat loudly. But the cook was irritated and threatened to send the kid to the principal's office, so the kid was scared and stopped talking and moved on. The hungry student was relieved to finally got his food, but it was cold.

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